WHOA!!! Are you sure you don't know what this means really? This is amazing...It is about a man who has lived lies and doesn't know how to fully express his feelings he then realizes that all his life he were not feeling the truth inside, so he just passed on. The objects he surrounded himself with even knew how torn he was...This is great! I love it!

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I've left DeviantArt Because of this: [link]

Nice poem! Love the flow in it. Plus, the imagery really helped build up the atmosphere. Good job!

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Some people say they haven't yet found themselves. But the self is not something one finds; it is something one creates.

You are an incredible poet, hun. I really, really like these, but this stanza really stands out to me:

"And his interaction;
confusing the meal.
He says he is 57,
but the knife heard 17,
and the tablecloth 83."

Honestly, that was my favorite. You may be ill, but your mind is still working!!

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My only accomplishment as an artist is I got fanart into Newtype USA's April 2006 issue. But hey, that's works for me.

...That totally works for me XD

And well, I haven't tried to analyze it. Hell, I was just writing how I sorta felt. Monday night I was feeling really shitty from being sick, and just just ended up writing something with a somewhat grotesque scene. Then I read "Moulin Rouge Spectacular Spectacular" on a site so I decided to incorporate acting into it with the idea of seeing an act when all the man is doing is sitting. Not as trivial as an infamous speaker merely sitting in lecture halls as people listen to his silence, but it works. And it just made a circle into death where the soup is still there spoiling, but the man is gone in a sense. The soup honestly came from me eating a bowl of soup (the only thing I ate that day) and feeling worse as I ate it. And again, the grotesque nature is me feeling like crap (although I'm sure your infection has been much worse from how it sounds x.x). All in all I didn't think too much about the meaning behind it >__>

Yeah, my explanation really didn't give a meaning, and is just long. I'll goes with yours XD He's definitely living lies though, cuz I have been as well. *cough*

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If I were a tachikoma, I'd link up to someone meditating and download enlightment.

Well I guess I interpreted this poem pretty well.

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I've left DeviantArt Because of this: [link]

I agree with ~ShimaAndTempis--I loved that stanza in particular.

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Clearfield Review: Prose, Poetry, Art.

I <3 your flow of words and how you play each off the other.

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"A creative mind can be a gift and a curse, offering fantastic inspiration one moment, but wild suggestions of impending doom the next." -K-os

I claimed Walter from Hellsing at Bishie-Stalkers-Club! (Hahaha, he's mine biatches!)

The first line threw me, as "There is no spoon" instantly brought The Matrix to mind, but I enjoyed the poem once I got past that stumbling block and read it all the way through. I particularly liked this part:

"And his interaction;
confusing the meal.
He says he is 57,
but the knife heard 17,
and the tablecloth 83."

Normally I'd want those numbers written-out, but I like them as digits in this instance.